谈谈翻译中望文生义的几种原因
望文生义是英语翻译中常见的一种错误现象,这种似是而非、貌合神离的现象也可概括为"想当然",是翻译者的大忌,其产生的原因是复杂而多方面,本文对此做一初步探讨
谈谈翻译中望文生义的几种原因
一、词义理解不当
英语词汇中一词多义的情况是相当多的,如“只知其一,不知其二”,就会造成错误理解。勤查和细查词典(包括用英语解释英语的英英词典)才能避免;所谓勤查是多查几本词典,所谓细查是从头到尾地查阅,不厌其烦,才能扩大视野,并找到合适的词义。
1. For the balance of the section, let’s speak in straightforward and elementary terms to describe the function and form of the electronic computer.
[误译]为使这一节平衡起见,我们将用简单明了的术语来描述这种电子计算机的功能和形式。
[分析]在《朗曼当代英语词典》balance词条下可查到money or something else which remains or is left over,又见例句:May I take the balance of my holidays before the end of September ?
[正译]在本节的其余部分,我们将用简单明了的术语来描述这种电子计算机的功能和形式。
2. We have a sales force at present of twenty-four salesmen of the road, each with his own territory.
[误译]目前我们有一支由20名外勤推销员组成的推销队正在途中,每人有他自己的推销领域。
[分析]在商业英语中on the road =away from home use,in regular travel on business esp. as a traveling salesman (Webster’s Third New International Dictionary of the English Language) ,故salesmen on the road 作“外勤推销员”解。
[正译]目前我们有一支由24名外勤推销员组成的推销队伍,每人有自己的推销地盘。
3. Sleeping late on weekends can also disrupt your circadian rhythm.
[误译]周未迟睡也会打乱人体的日夜周期。
[分析]此句 sleeping late误译为“迟睡”即“睡得晚”,“晚睡”),实际上它表示“起得晚”或“睡懒觉”。《从中式英语到英语》的作者Janet Adams 写道:“Remember that sleep late means to get up late and not go to bed late.
[正译]周末睡懒觉也会打乱人体的日夜周期。
二、语法结构理解不当
译者对语法结构理解不当,如分不清词性、指代关系以及句型等,就会直接造成误译。
1. Magnetic fields of the former kind are geerally about a million times weaker than the Earth’s field ,whereas those originating from the traveling signals of nerve cells are even weaker, some hundred million times less than the earth’s field at their strongest.
[原译]前一类磁场通常只有地球磁场的一百万分之一左右,而由神经细胞传播的信号产生的磁场则更弱,最强的时候也只有地球磁场的几亿分之一。
[分析]此处some 不是形容词(或称determiner限定词),而是副词,经常用在数词之前,相当于about“大约”,如There were some 40 or50 peop0le there.故some hundred million 应译成“约一亿”。
[正译]……只有地球磁场的约一亿分之一。
2. Now Jeffreys points out that, if a number of observations have been found to conform to a law, it is highly probable that next one will do so whether the law is true or not.
[误译]现在杰佛利指出,如果已获得大量的观察资料与一条法则一致,非常可能下一条法则也将如此,不管该法则正确与否。
[分析]此句的代词one,它指代observation而不是law,否则变成“法则与法则相一致”,这在逻辑上也自相矛盾。
[正译]……非常可以下一次观察也与该法则相一致,不管它正确与否。
三、缺乏专业知识
科技翻译往往涉及众多领域,各种专业,为了提高翻译质量,译者不仅要熟练掌握英汉两门语言,而且也应具有一定的专业知识的素养。隔行如隔山,每个专业都有各自一套术语。
1. By the age of 19 Gauss had discovered for himself and proved a remarkable theorem in number theory known as the law of quadratic reciprocity.
[误译]高斯十九岁已经独立地发现并证明了数理定理——二次互反律。
[分析]将number theory 误为“数理”,系不了解专业所致,其实它在数学上是指“数论”,与“数理”是两个不同的概念。
[正译]……并证明了数论中的一个卓越定理,名谓二次互反律。
2. Designed to predict the motions of hesavenly bodies ,it does its job with unbelievable accuracy——better than one in a hndred million for the motion of the earth around the sun——and it remains in daily use to predict the orbits of moons and planets ,comets and spacecraft.
[误译]这个旨在预测天体运行的理论,其准确性令人难以置信——以地球绕太阳运转为例,其误差仅略大于一亿分之一,并且时至今日仍然每日要用它来预测卫星和行星、慧星和航天器的运行轨道。
[分析]原文并无“仅略”的含义,应删去。Better than 修饰accuracy,意为“准确度胜于”或“比……更为准确”,即“误差小于”。
[正译]……,其误差小于一亿分之一,……。
3. When allowance is made for the separate auxiliary load the consumption can rise to nearly 1 Ib/SHP hour and this is generally about 20% better than the overall fuel consumption of a steam plant at cruising speed.
[误译]当考虑分开的辅机负荷时,其耗油率几乎能增加到1磅/轴马力小时,一般来说比蒸汽装置的巡航总油耗大约多20%。
[分析]此处better than 用来修饰“油耗”时必然指油耗低,而不是指油耗高。
[正译] ……,一般来说,这是比蒸汽装置在巡航速度时的总油耗约低20%。
四、缺乏背景知识
译者如不了解所译内容的背景,也易造成望文生义。
1. Anyone who has tugged heavy hand baggage down endless airport corridors, or waited for a deluged flight in a sterile lounge will bow how user unfriendly many airports are in design terms .
[误译]任何人只要他曾拖着沉重的随身行李,走过无止境的机场走廊,或者曾在枯燥乏味的休息室里等候延误的班机,都会体会到许多机场在设计上对旅客多么不方便。
[分析]此处endless 误译为“无止境的”,实际上作“环状的”解(circular,with the ends joined ),一般大型国际机场,从候机室通向各跑道的走廊呈环状,两头是相联接的。
[正译] ……,走过环形的机场走廊,……
2. I am/ we are carrying currency or monetary instruments over $ 10000 U.S. or foreign equivalent.
[误译]我(我们)携带有货币或价值超过10000美元的仪器或相当于10000美元的外币的仪器。
[分析]原译将instruments 作“仪器”解,显然是缺乏背景知识和脱离上下文所造成的失误。此处系指“证券,票据”;monetary instruments 应译“金融证券”。
[正译]我(我们)携带超过10000美元或等值外币现金或金融证券。
五、习惯势力影响
习惯势力也会造成误译,如下列句中的at the same time,也许这一短语太熟悉了,因此往往习惯地译成“同时”,其实此处上下文并不存在时间上的关系,而是让步关系。
1. In most cases,…he knows that certain manufacturing processes will have to be employed .In many instances ,the selection of a specific material may dictate what processing must be used .At the same time .when certain processes are used ,the design may have to be modified in order for the process to be utilized effectively and economically.
[原译]在大多数情况下,……他知道必须采用某些制造过程。在许多情况下,选择特定的材料就规定了须用什么加工过程。同时在采用某些加过程时,可能要修改设计,以便有效地、经济地利用这些加工过程。
[分析]at the same time 有两项释义“同时”和“然而”。上句中该短语并非指时间上的关系,而是用这个短语引出一个需要人们注意的事实。英语词典中至少有八部国外出版的词典,在at the same time 条下仅列出however一项释义。据国内首届一指的《英汉大词典》编写组称:至于为何有些词典只有however解,可能编篡者不收习语的literal meaning 之故,笔者以为言之有理。
[改译] ……。然而在采用某些加工过程时,……。
2. The force of gravity and the friction of the air near the earth are working against the satellite.
[分析]英文可说near the earth,不能照译“地球附近”,因该词语仅指位置(location),即直线距离(linear distance),但地球不是单一平面,而是球体。
[正译]引力和地球附近的空气阻力对卫星起阻碍作用。
六、疏忽大意
有些译作总体上说是高质量的,但也有望文生义的现象,如不属于本文上述五个方面的原因,则可能是疏忽大意所致。
1. Feedback, which one-way communication like the printed page fails to provide, makes learning easy and, in the case of motor skills,is essential.
[误译]反馈能使学习变得方便,而象印刷品之类的单向信息传递就没有反馈。在学习驾驶摩托车时,反馈更必不可少。
[分析]in the case of“就…来说(而言),论到,提到,至于”。Motors skills 是教育学上的名称,指“运动技能”,而不是指“摩托车驾驶”。
[正译] ……就运动技能而言,反馈更必不可少。
2. The results of that decision can now be evaluated as the first ships of the new gas turbine Navy far enough advanced to enable a comparison to be made with existing steam turbine warships.
[误译] ……,并以英海军第一艘先进的新型燃气轮机舰只与现有蒸汽轮机舰只相比来估价这个决定的结果。
[按]将first 误译为“第一艘”,将advanced误为“先进的”,均系不认真严肃所致。
[正译]现在可以来评论这一决定的结果了,因为英国海军首批新燃气轮机舰只已大有进展,足以用来和现有的汽轮机军舰作一比较。
3. There is generally an advantage in being able to keep propelling machinery as far aft as a large gearbox restricts possible, but this positioning.
[误译]一般来说,使推进装置尽可能远离舰尾是有利的,但是这样布置会受到大齿轮箱的限制。
[分析]如far aft 译为“远离舰尾”,意思就完全颠倒了。此处far相当于much,considerably,to a great extent. Aft [a : ft ]非常接近船尾。由于“尽可能接近舰尾”这一概念已相当明确,故“非常”可不译出。
[正译]一般来说,使推进装置尽可能靠近舰尾是有利的,但是这种布置会受到大齿轮箱的限制。
最后尚须指出,有时望文是由多种因素所造成,请看下面的句子系受词汇、专业、习惯等影响。
In practice ,a rotor weighing about 10 tons and rotating at 3,000 r .p . m . may be so well balanced that the motion ,except for sound ,is just perceptible.
实际上,一根据重约10吨、每分钟3000转的转子可以平衡得非常好,以致除了响声外,人们几乎觉察不出它是在转动。
[分析]此处just =almost not, hardly 曾误译为“正好觉察得出……”,这样意思就反了。