如何让英语作文有亮点

书面表达就是用书面的形式进行语言交际，它和口头表达不同。它不能随意发挥，也不能逐字逐句地翻译所给的提示或参考材料，必须根据题目的要求和所给的情景进行表达，而且叙述议论必须明了得当，语言要准确，要符合书面语的规则。下面是小编整理的让英语作文有亮点的方法，以供大家学习参考。

如何让英语作文有亮点

一、遣词贴切准确

1.词义准确

例1：这个男人的病情危险。

误：The man is dangerous.(这个人是个危险分子。)

正：The man is seriously ill.

2.词性适当

例2：她做的实验获得了成功。

正：She succeeded in carrying out the experiment.

正：She was successful in carrying out the experiment.

3.搭配无误

例3：我突然想到一个好主意。

正：Suddenly I thought up a good idea.

正：A good idea occurred to/struck/hit me.

二、造句灵活多变

1.熟用it句型

例4：In our daily life，it is essential for us to form some good habits.

it句型还有很多，同学们在日常写作训练中，如果能有意识地正确使用it句型，那么会为文章增添不少色彩。

2.学用复合句

比较适宜使用复合句的两种情况：

(1)简单句较多时

例5：Eighteen years ago，when Lin Shuhao was a little boy，he began playing basketball. He had gone through many hardships since he graduated from Harvard in 2011. But he trained himself as hard as possible，which led him to be a famous basketball player.

使用复合句使前后的句子形成一个有机的整体，读起来顺畅自然。

(2)连接上下文时

例6：Mr. John taught us how to learn English. What he said left deep impression on me. We’ve decided to speak more English in daily life because spoken English is very important in communication.

使用复合句使句子之间关系紧凑、一气呵成。

3.会用强调句

例7：It was your kindness and your money that helped me to go back to my senior high school.

此句中强调句的运用使得作者的情感表现得更加强烈。同学们只要掌握了强调句的基本结构，并在写作时熟练地运用，就能大大增强文章的感染力。

4.巧用非谓语动词

同学们若能恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，就会使句子读起来更加形象、生动，从而传递出不同语境下的不同内涵。如：

例8：Moved by the English teacher’s words，we were determined to study hard.

例9：With so much work to do，I have no time for a holiday.

三、谋篇连贯顺畅

同学们要恰当地运用平时积累下来的连接词或过渡性短语来表示句与句之间、段与段之间的逻辑关系，以使文章连贯、紧凑、自然、流畅。

例10：As we all know，vocabulary is the basis of a language. So mastering a number of words is of vital importance，which no doubt is beneficial to our writing. Besides，it’s necessary and useful for us to read beautiful English articles. Last but not the least，practice makes perfect.