初三英语写作指导_初三英语写作指导方法

2017-05-26

初三英语写作指导

写作中常用的词语：

先后顺序： At first, First of all, To start with , To begin with, secondly, thirdly, then, next, Later,

after that, finally, at last, in the end, since then,

举例：Let me tell you something about it. for example , such as, like , including…

引入话题：

as we know, As for clothes/food/ houses/ traffic, as for eating/housing/traveling

补充递进：

And, Also, besides, not only…but also…, in this way, what’s more,

in other words, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand,

Every coin has two sides..

转折：however, but, while, even though, although, or(否则), It’s true that, in fact , to be honest … 功能影响： can make, can help , can influence, can cause…

be good/ bad for , be helpful/harmful to ,

因果：because, so, because of, so that, therefore, as a result….

并列：and, too, either…or…, both…and…, as well as(以及),

条件： if/when…will…, unless, as long as , if possible, if so, if necessary，if then , only if / when, 总结评价：

It’s easy / hard / interesting / important / necessary for us to be polite.

That is to say, What’s more important, in a word, all in all, above all(综上所述)，

It’s clear that…,

个人观点与情感：

in my opinion, I think things will be much better in the near future.

I believe you can make it. I hope our society will be more polite. I’m sure you will succeed. It makes me feel really tired…

If we work together, our world /country/society/ environment/future will be…

I find it easy to keep healthy/ to protect the environment/…

How busy but happy I was!

What a kind/nice/polite girl she is!

呼吁：

let’s join our hands together to make a better world /society/ environment / future.

It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.

Everyone should play a role in saving the earth.

Why not join us now to help make a polite/ safe/ better world / society /environment ? 互动：Do you agree with me? What do you think of my advice /suggestions /ideas ?

推荐成语：

Believe it or not. 信不信由你。 Believe yourself!相信自己。

Don’t kill chichens for eggs. 不要杀鸡取卵。

Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。

No pains， no gains. 不劳无获。

Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

Two heads are better than one. 两人智慧胜一人。

Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。

Time is money. 时间就是金钱。

Time is everything. 时间就是一切。

Time and tide waits for no man. 岁月不等人。

Don’t put today’s work till tomorrow. 今日事，今日毕。

Every coin has two sides. 任何事都有两面性。

Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

Anything is possible. 一切皆有可能。

Never say die! 绝不要气馁。永不言败。=Never give up!永不放弃! Never know it till you try it! 绝知此事要躬行! Hold fast to your dream! 坚持梦想! Stick to it and you’ll achieve it. 坚持就会成功! Go for it and you’ll make it. 爱拼才会赢!

初三英语写作指导方法

一、审题四定

1. 确定文体：

书信(a letter, an email),记叙，描写，议论说理，说明，日记(a diary),通知(a notice)等。

2. 确定人称与数：第I、II、III人称，单复数

3. 确定时态：

一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时，过去进行时，现在完成时等。

4. 确定结构：三段式(头身尾)(启承转合)

二、搭框架，列提纲

(按一定逻辑列出关键词语或短句)

常见的框架模型：列事实设问解决方法或建议个人观点或情感 (褒贬) 段落结构：①facts ② main idea examples feelings

列提纲的常用方法：

1. 问答式 2. 提纲式 3. 心智图式mind-mapping 4. 框架式 5. 头脑风暴式brainstorm

三、打草稿(要留空方便改写 )

1. 将提纲中的要点写成句子，形成段或篇。记叙文要有线索和评价，说理文要注重观点与事例的密切相关性。

2. 注重各种句型的选用尽量使用简单句(包括there be句型、感叹句、祈使句和评价句型)、并列句(含有and, or, both…and…, either…or…,neither…nor…,not only…but also…等)，适当使用复合句(主要是宾语从句、状语从句---含if、unless、when、until、as soon as、because、so、though、but、than等)，少用定语从句。

3. 注意词性、词序、词形。

如：(1) pollute，pollution，polluted(受污染的).

(2) develop, development, developed(发达的)/ developing(发展中的)

(3)succeed, success, successful , successfully状语多用于句尾, 时间、地点、方式、原因、比较等可后置。

(4) 注意时态、人称和数的使用。

(5) 注意使用扩句、并句等。使用各种技巧扩句，用形容词、副词、介词短语、动词不定式(to do sth.)、从句等可扩句。如: It’s really necessary for us to protect the environment if we want to live a better life.

(6) 注意选择与话题相关的功能句型。

常用的功能有：表达喜恶爱好类，习惯类、变化类、推测预测类、功能影响类、利弊类、意见建议类、方法类、感觉类、观点评价类、比较类、感恩类、交流类、交通方式类、通讯类、规则类等。常见的话题有健康类、环保类、安全类、文明礼仪类、感恩类、旅游类、民俗节日类、写人记事类、时尚类。

3. 润饰：

(1) 词语的推敲(2)句型变化(3)关联意群的确立(4)修辞(比喻、排比、夸张等)

四、审稿查错(标点、拼写)

五、仔细誊写(工整、清晰)

初三英语写作范文

俗话说，熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也会吟，英语写作也是如此。命题者为了让考生有话可写，必然会涉及中学生身边熟悉的生活，包括人物和事件。只要我们对这些内容的写作都能熟练掌握，相信在考场作文的时候必然会得心应手。

1.体育锻练(sports)

•作为一名初三的学生，我们每天进行体育锻炼，如做操、打篮球„因为运动能增强体质，减少疾病。运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。通过体育锻炼我„在今后我要„

•词汇：Junior Three, do sports, morning exercises, take exercise, health, healthy, relax, strong, necessary, kinds of

•句型：such as, so on, I think„, Doing„;so that„;become„ and „;It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.;„ because„

范文1. As a Grade 3 student, we have sports every day, such as doing some exercise, playing basketball and so on. We do sports because it can not only make us strong and but also keep us healthy. It can also make us have a good rest and study better. So I will keep doing sports every day from now on.

范文2. As a middle school student of Junior Three, I do sports one or two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very helpful to me. Taking exercise makes me healthier so that I won’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxed in different kinds of sports, and then I do the better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physical exercise, I’m becoming stronger and more confident than before. I think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day

because people’s health is essential in modern life.

2.日记

•今天(4月15日)上午你去参加了英语角活动。请根据提示写一篇日记。 •简介：英语角成立于三年前，许多中学生参加，还有大学生和外国朋友。 •地点：家附近的公园。内容：练口语，谈感兴趣的事，交流学习英语的经验。

•感想：很„下决心„

•词汇：English corner, found, college students, foreigners, take part in, activity, experience, chance, exchange, widely, talk about, improve

•句型： which/ that + clause; It is „ since„;as well as; practice doing;I think„，„ after„;try one’s best to do„;be + done 范文1

•15th, April Fine

• This morning I went to the English corner which is in the park near my home. It is three years since it was founded. Many middle school students as well as college students and foreigners take part in the activity. People there practice speaking English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is a good chance for me to use what I have learnt in my English class. I felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best to learn English better, for it is so widely used in the world. •范文2.

•April, 15 Fine

• How interesting! I went to an English corner in a park near my home this morning. There were many students and foreign friends in the English corner. The English corner was founded three years ago. I think we can not only practice speaking English but also make a lot of foreign friends. We talked about interesting things and exchanged the

experience of learning English with each other. I have improved my English since I became a member of the English corner.

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