初中英语作文点评

英语作文一直是中学英语教学的薄弱环节,如果教师对于学生的引导不到位,就会出现阅读教学的读、写分离现象。下面，是小编为你整理的初中英语作文点评，希望对你有帮助!

初中英语作文点评篇1

Last saturday ,my family kewn knew (the news that)i I won (the) English competitionnews . inIn order to cerebrate i had won English competition(it)., my parents decided to go to (a) nearbourhood club play on this sunday .weWe were very happiedhappy andlooked forwardto playing.looking forward to it.

InOn that day ,we were gegot up (very) early and eathad breakfast (quickly). Then we walked to (the) club slowly ,and chated each other .on our way to (the) club ,we talked ourselvswith each other very happyhappliy. Quickly Soon,we arrived (at the) club . this club had all sorts of palyWe can do a lot of things and enjoy ourselves in this club.such as sportdoing some sports ,amusement ,study and so onand studying .Look!when my parents went to read room ,they going to read. My parents were going to the reading room to do some reading. Grandma was talkedtalking to (some) other olderold people abortabout they lifelives,.(My) sisters playedwere playing badminton happily....what i didWhat did I do? I went to play computer games .we didn'tcamecome back until we palyedwere tired .What a happy day!

点评：

1、句首一定要大写，要注意一些拼写错误。

2、全文的时态一定要保持一致，如果是过去时就全部用过去时。

3、语法掌握得还是不太够。如：动词要用副词来修饰，系动词后要接形容词，such as前不用逗号隔开等等

4、该同学努力尝试描写清楚一件事情，这种态度很好，坚持下去，多练练，会有收获的。

初中英语作文点评篇2

(Nowadays,) English is most widely used in the world,. It's very important，(b)But most of us have difficulty in learning it. If you have difficulty in English. (feel that it is not that easy to learn English well,) Here is some advice.

1. (Firstly,/First of all,) Listening (listen to) English songs,(and) watch English movies.

2. (Secondly,) Reading a passage (read some English passages),(t)Then try to retell it (them) (by) yourself.we(We) should speak English with our teachers,classmates an(and) even with foreigners as often as possible.

3. (Thirdly)You (you) can read the English paper or a magazine(s).such as Chain(China) Daily.

4. (Forthly) Keeping (keeping) a diary is a good way to practice your (English) writing.

5. (Last but not least,) If you can’t remember new words，you can copy them (write them down) onprices ( a piece) of paper. (then) stick them (it) on the walls in your room.

In a word. (All in all,) If you can keep on learning English and never give up, I'm sure your

English will become (be) better and better!

点评：

1、三段式的写作结构很好，清晰了然。

2、注意只有句首的首字母才需要大写。

3、举例或罗列时，最好不要用阿拉伯数字1、2、3……。要用英语写，我已经在文中修改过了。

4、总体来说，句子结构相对简单，可以尝试用一两句从句，这样文章会增彩不少。

初中英语作文点评篇3

Hu Yue is my new friend，In our class, she likes singing and she can sing very well.

She's 1.60meters tall. she has blank hair and wears school uniform.She is very lovely and pretty. She likes eating hamburger, vegetable and peanuts and dislikes fishesfish, green tea and sweets,She also loves listening to music,reading and writing. Her favorite hobby is drawing. because she likes all the different colors,She is really great!

点评：本文基本没有语法错误，但是篇幅太短，信息传递不够全面，同时没有出彩的短语结构，可以在这几方面再进行提升。

1) 写此类主题的作文可以不用分段

2)如能善用连接词会更好，比如在描写兴趣爱好的时候可以用“…but……”“not only…but also…”等等